英语高手英语老师出国留学人士请帮帮我,下面表达有语法错误吗?清华大学北京大学复旦大学学生教授请帮忙

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英语高手英语老师出国留学人士请帮帮我,下面表达有语法错误吗?清华大学北京大学复旦大学学生教授请帮忙

英语高手看下有语法错误么?

有两处错误 1 是grief  2是care

应写成 do not make  the people who care  about you  grieved..

也可以  do not make the people grieved  who care about you.

请英文高手帮我看看下面的英文有哪些语法错误,在线等,很快采纳.

 粗体字是对你原文的改动

Thank you so much for your reply and your advice. I've thought of your suggestion very carefully. I accept the truth  that I must face the problems that will probably arise in my future study. If I can not solve the Englidh problem, how can I  challenge lots of professional difficulties? I should not find excuse for my poor English scores just because of the accidents during the test. But what I want to say is that I really feel my English is much  better than before since I have found my weakness in my English. I keep studying everyday. If your school haven't made the final decision, could I have a chance to be accepted? Take English class, study hard and  things would be changed. No one knows how powerful human potential is and It's difficult to say where will be going in the next few months.

英语高手请帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误吗

message that - message saying that

has gone - had gone

enjoy the mid-autumn day - spend Mid-Autumn Festival

wouldn't go - didn't (want to) go

enjoy it myself - spend it by myself

has sent - had sent

received yet - received them yet

where and how will i enjoy the day.i am hoping its coming. - Wherever and however I'm going to spend it, I'm still looking forward to the festival.

remembered - remember

my best friend D of colledge - my best friend from college, D

memory - memories

the day in my home ?????

it be feeled only in your family - it can only be felt in a family

tastes mixed - taste is mixed

favour of family ????

can't enjoy - won't be able to enjoy

watched - was watching

will - would

my show ???

autumn prams ????

shanghai tv - the TV shows in Shanghai

many stars from my show will come to the program ???

with eating the mooncakes - while eating mooncakes

ia funny - will be fun

mid-autumn day - Mid-Autumn Festival

catty ????

英文高手帮我看一下!下面这段英文,有没有语法及书写错误,请帮忙改正!

Please refer to the quotation,

Kitchenware quotation will be a bit late for you.

If you have any questio

If you have any question.基本上无错误,只有一个,就是question你没有写完全。