麻烦各位帮忙检查一下这篇文章的语法错误，谢谢！
same前面最好加上the, on改成at, can改成always, fish改成fishes, dog加s, they can改成they would（老实说，小孩是不许喝酒的）, cake加s，后那句我认为 parents would pretend Father Christmas to put some prestens in their socks untill their children doze off, 最后 children being very happy.
个人观点，不作商业用途，望采纳。
这句话有语法错误吗？ 请指出 谢谢！
定冠词the不要 从句部分用完成时 而不是进行时
英语句子改错
It was Sunday yesterday. My classmates and I went to a
nearby village to help the farmers get in the crops.
We took the school bus and left for our school at 8:00 in the
morning. It took us half hour to reach the village. As soon as
we got there, we joined the farmers in their harvesting work.
They taught us how to cut and gather crops and we told them
something about our school life. It was in the fileds where we had
our lunch. After lunch, we have a short rest. We were all impressed
by beautiful sceneries of the countryside. It got dark when
we returned home . We were all tried, but we英语的句子改错
getting 前 加 in
help sb in doing sth，与某人一同做某事
scenery是不可数的
其他的与1楼的一致